Monday, September 8, 2014

How to do corrections


How to Do Corrections for Dr. Carter

1.       First, write a cover letter in which you:

a.       Thank your teacher for the opportunity to improve your writing. This thank-you need not be overly long, but should not be ironic.

b.      Describe the worst  errors  you had in your paper.

c.       Describe what strategies you are going to use to ensure that you do not make those errors ever again. Be specific; “I am going to try harder” is NOT a strategy.

2.       Then copy and paste your errors into a new document and label them, e.g.

Fragment:           Beowulf feels confidence. Confidence in himself.

3.       Then underneath the error, write the correction, e.g.

 

Fragment:           Beowulf feels confidence. Confidence in himself.

Correction:         Beowulf feels confidence in himself.

 

4.       Then turn the cover letter, the errors and corrections, the original paper, and the grade sheet in to Dr. Carter.

Thursday, August 28, 2014


 Wheeler HS Composition Grading Sheet                            Name __________________________

 


Form


Fragment (5/10/15/20) ________________ Run-On (5/10/15/20) __________________

You/your/yours (2/5) _____________________________________________________
 
I/me/my (2/5) _____________________________________________________________

Subject/Verb Agreement (2/5) ________________________________________________

Pronoun/Antecedent Agreement (2/5) __________________________________________

Spelling (2) ________________________________________________________________

Capitalization (1) ___________________________________________________________

Punctuation (1) ____________________________________________________________

Contraction (1) _____________________________________________________________

Tense Shift (1) _____________________________________________________________

Appropriate Tone (1) ________________________________________________________

Passive (1) _________________________________________________________________

Word Choice (1) ____________________________________________________________

Awkward Phrasing (1) _______________________________________________________

Quote Format (1) ___________________________________________________________

Documentation Format (1) ___________________________________________________

 

Content


Interesting Ideas (5/10) ______________________________________________________

Style/Originality (5/10) ______________________________________________________

Focus/Point of View (5/10) ___________________________________________________

On Topic (5/10) ____________________________________________________________

Organization (5/10) _________________________________________________________

Development (5/10) _________________________________________________________
 
Adequate Length (5/10) _____________________________________________________

Adequate Support (5/10) ____________________________________________________

Facts (5/10) ______________________________________________________________

Logic (5/10) ________________________________________________________________

Tuesday, August 26, 2014

short Fiction Literary Terms


SHORT FICTION

LITERARY TERMS

 

Plot

5 parts of a plot

Internal conflict

External conflict

Direct characterization

Indirect characterization

Dynamic character

Static character

3 kinds of irony

Flat character

Round character

Protagonist

Antagonist

Setting

1st person POV

3rd person omniscient POV

3rd person limited POV

theme